Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or example

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It is said that people should work for

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for whole life whilst others believe that they should change their job frequently to work with different companies. I think both approaches have benefits and drawbacks, and I will outline in

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essay. On the

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hand, the employees who have been working for a long time will be justified for promotion in corporate ladder

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because they are the employees with the most experience and talent.

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, companies always tend to value loyalty as the utmost importance criteria in their culture and business.

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, they usually reward loyal workers for their contribution

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as long service award after 5, 10 or 15 years working with GE corporate as an example.

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, companies are

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eager to keep these talents as the invaluable assets from being brain-drain of peers which means the career of the employee is secured.

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, a boring working environment and repeated procedure daily would be an issue for workers to concern.

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, working in different organizations gives a chance to workers to discover or gain a suitable workplace, colleagues or team. It is

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especially suitable for fresh graduate people who really want to look for a decent job after some trying with various employers. Anyway, there may be a drawback that management board will not consider these staffs for long term strategy. They might be put aside for any opportunity in career

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as professional training or personal level adjustment because the management doesn’t want to waste for any human resources’ investment to staffs who just want to get a new job frequently. In conclusion, working with

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for life time or shifting careers to various companies all have advantages and disadvantages. These depend on the current status that employees can make up their mind to stay with the

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or pursue other opportunities outside. In my opinion, I always look for stable status,

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I prefer to work for

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if it is available.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

stability
loyalty
seniority
job satisfaction
rapidly changing job market
adapt to
work culture
career progression
network
diversity of experience
adaptability
career aspirations
dynamic nature

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