More and more students are choosing to study at college and universities in foreign countries. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

A growing number of students choose to earn their tertiary education outside their countries in different universities worldwide.
learnig
Suggestion
Learning
Learned
Learnig
to be
idependent
free from external control and constraint
independent
and explore new
horizone
the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet
horizon
horizons
are some benefits they can get from
this
experience while there are some minor disadvantages can be considered and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that benefits are far
more great
Suggestion
greater
than
disadvantages
Suggestion
the disadvantages
.
Firstly
, studying in a
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
country is a great experience as the student can depend on him or herself away from their parents in all their daily
activeties
any specific behavior
activities
, studying, eating and managing time and money properly because now they are alone they have to trust
themselvesm
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
, grow up to be adults and
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
their future goals.
for
Suggestion
For
examplem
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
.
Secondly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to continue studying in
forign
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
contries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
teach them new languages, cultures and visit new
hstorical
of or relating to the study of history
historical
places. In UK there are around 100,000 students from many countries who are
graduated
Suggestion
graduating
every year in many colleges with excellent grades. In spite of the former advantageous
imacts
the striking of one body against another
impacts
,
Accept space
,
still there are negative points to be discussed,
home sickness
a longing to return home
homesickness
is affecting a group of students
prventing
keep from happening or arising; make impossible
preventing
them from studying properly because of spending time thinking of their parents, their homes and friends.
Also
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
barrier is an obstacle for some students they
can not
can not
cannot
manage to react with their
coleagues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
colleges
colleague
, order foods, or using public transport.
For instance
,
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
20 percent of
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
students in
oxford
a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
Oxford
university return their home countries in the
first
year because they
can not
can not
cannot
adapt to the new situations away from
thir
of them or themselves
their
countries. In
conclusin
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, the major positive effect of studying abroad
outweigh
Suggestion
outweighs
any negative
imacts
the striking of one body against another
impacts
like homesickness and
language barrier
Suggestion
language barriers
a language barrier
.

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