More & more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home & take care of their children while wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many fathers are taking leave from a
job
& mothers are working. Therefore
, fathers might stay in house
to take care of their children as well as Suggestion
the house
house
. Suggestion
houses
the house
Also
, it might be good for their family rather then
working conjunction used in comparatives
than
both
of them whole day
. It is true that, one parent should stay Suggestion
the whole day
in
home to look after their children & house. Suggestion
at
This
essay don't agree the statement made about parent should not work
& leave a job
for children.This
essay will discuss about why fathers should not give up his job
& parents should work
as a full time job
to more earn
income.
Suggestion
to earn more
Firstly
, fathers giving up his career might be unhappy by
his decision. He might Suggestion
with
missing
his tough & challenging Suggestion
miss
job
which he has sacrificed for his children. Moreover
, children are whole day in school, might be he get
boredom. Suggestion
got
For instance
, my cousin brother who left his job
for his children & all the time he is resident in
Suggestion
at
home
. In Suggestion
the home
exchange he
does household Accept comma addition
exchange, he
work
such
as mopping floors, cooking & feeding to his children.
In addition
, if fathers & mothers
Accept comma addition
mothers, both
both
are not working they give
up their salaries. In fact, if parents are working they have Suggestion
gave
better lifestyle
than a single working parent. Nowadays, the situation is that, Suggestion
a better lifestyle
both
the parents should work
in this
expensive world. In contrast
, if single working mothers can not earn enough money, then
they have a changing living method. For example
, according to the survey of Business Times in 2017, usually both
the parents are working whole day in metro cities. So that they can have a healthy & wealthy living style
which will be good for their children future & family.
To conclude, that parents should have a Suggestion
a wealthy living style
job
for well-being of children career & family. Parents can spend time of togetherness with kids during a family trip or holiday & in
evening.Suggestion
at
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