More & more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Many fathers are taking leave from a
job
& mothers are working. Therefore
, fathers can stay in
Suggestion
at
home
to take care of their children as well as house
. Suggestion
houses
the house
Also
, it might be good for their family rather than working both
of them whole
Suggestion
the whole day
day
. It is true that, parent should stay in
Suggestion
at
home
to look after their children. This
essay don't agree
to the statement that fathers should give up his Suggestion
doesn't agree
job
. Thus
essay will discuss about why fathers should not give up his Suggestion
This
job
& both
parents should work to earn more income.
Firstly
, fathers giving up his career might be unhappy by
his decision. He might Suggestion
with
missing
his tough & challenging Suggestion
miss
job
which he has sacrificed for his children. Moreover
, children are not usually in
Suggestion
at
home
as they are whole day
in school. Fathers might get boredom by doing households
works. Suggestion
household
For instance
, my cousin brother who left his job
for his children & entire day
awaiting at home
. In exchange he
does households works Accept comma addition
exchange, he
such
as mopping floors, cooking & feeding to his children.
In addition
, fathers & mothers
Accept comma addition
mothers, both
both
are working for their children to earn more salaries. In fact, if parents are working they have better lifestyle
than Suggestion
a better lifestyle
single working parent
. Suggestion
a single working parent
Futhermore
, the situation is that in addition
Furthermore
both
the parents should work in this
expensive world to have a desired lifestyle. The condition might be if single parent
is working, she is not earning enough money due which has Suggestion
a single parent
impact
on living style. Suggestion
an impact
For example
, according to the survey of Business Times in 2017, both
the parents are working whole day
to have a standard of living as well as for children future
.
To conclude, parents should have a Suggestion
the child's future
child's future
children's future
job
for well-being of children career & family. Parents can spend time of togetherness with their kids during holidays or in
a family trip or Suggestion
on
in
evening.Suggestion
at
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