some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Does physical

activity

really count? Many argue whether physical

education

should be a part of the students' curriculum at

school

. So in order to be able to decide on

such

a

matter it's

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matter, it's

better to see both sides of the argument. There's no denying that physical

activity

is good for one's health. It keeps the body in shape, energizes the brain and puts you in a better state.

Therefore

, including physical

activity

as a part of the

school

curriculum would ensure that the youth get a minimum amount of exercise weekly which will boost their health and leave them with clearer minds. It's

also

important to include sports as a syllabus because while some students excel academically and artistically there are others who excel physically and society should respect and

sport

the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities

support

that by giving the children the opportunity to explore their skills and capabilities. Given all that, some people believe that schools shouldn't include physical

activity

as a part of the students'

education

. They think that students should invest their time on academic material

instead

of sports.

That is

so they could get high grades and join

university

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the university

. There are many reasons why some people would think that children are better off without physical

education

some of them comes from the fact that only

few

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a few

make it in the sports field. It is

also

believed that physical

education

is the responsibility of the parents and not the

school

. In my opinion, I reckon that physical

education

is necessary. It promotes better health, encourages

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and competitiveness and makes us

active

Suggestion

act

. I imagine that few hours of exercise at

school

wouldn't hurt, if

anything it

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anything, it

would help the students become more goal focussed.

Finally

, these kinds of arguments are subject to different beliefs and opinions and sometimes it's hard to change people's minds.

However

, one must always weight the benefits and the costs before making his decision and

choses

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

chooses

chose

the best.