Some people believe that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hazardous

sport

has will be banned by many people because the negative side more than

positive side

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the positive side

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

am really agree

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really agree

have really agreed

with

this

statement.

first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

dangerous

sport

it

is not save

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doesn't save

for soul

athelete

a person trained to compete in sports

athlete

or another player.

second

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Second

a few children under age will be

imitate

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imitating

a dangerous action without safety.

and

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And

also

many of victim because dangerous

sport

To begin

with, boxing

sport

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sports

it is

common

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a common sport

sport

in much event

,

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many person like boxing because

reward

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the reward

from boxing it is very much

,

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,

however

few

person

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people

persons

do not like because it is like

violant

in the

sport

and can be threatening soul

athelete

.

a

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A

kind of boxing

such

a

moa

an adult person who is male (as opposed to a woman)

man

no

me

thai

a native or inhabitant of Thailand

Thai

to

that

it is boxing on the

thailand

a country of southeastern Asia that extends southward along the Isthmus of Kra to the Malay Peninsula

Thailand

.

in

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In

indonesian

the dialect of Malay used as the national language of the Republic of Indonesia or of Malaysia

Indonesian

boxing often lived in the television and many

person

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people

persons

like to watch

this

match.

chris

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Chris

john

the last of the four Gospels in the New Testament

John

gone

it is a boxer from

indonesian

the dialect of Malay used as the national language of the Republic of Indonesia or of Malaysia

Indonesian

and

also

he

get

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gets

much

achievment

the action of accomplishing something

achievement

from

internasional

any of several international socialist organizations

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international

and

also

local

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locally

.

a

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A

kind hazard

sport

is

motor

racing

,

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,

a

popolar

regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public

popular

event

motor

racing like moto

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GP

.

much people very

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Very many people

Many people very

Much people very

like to watch

motor

racing

,

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beacause

for the reason that; on account of

because

it is so popular.

but

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But

,

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,

in my point of view

motor

racing it is very dangerous.

especially

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Especially

if accident

occur

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occurs

.

of

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Of

course the rider can be loss the soul and

also

coast

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the coast

from

accident

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the accident

it is not cheap.

On the other hand

,

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children under the age very like to watch dangerous

sport

like boxing.

sometime

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Sometime

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think it is very hazard to kids because it is contain

violance

an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)

violence

.

if

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If

occur violance

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occur, violence

occur violence

in the

children

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children, such

such

a with friends in

school perhaps

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school, perhaps

that caused children often watch boxing match. To conclude,

although

some

sport

items can pose serious dangers to human life, I believe they

has

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have

had

are having

have had

to be banned because doing so will amount to the violation of individual liberties and rights.