the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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pie charts illustrate the

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of using

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in different fields in

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districts around the world. The

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occupies more

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% in four

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which are South

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, Africa, Central

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and South East

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, chief of all,

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has the largest

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of

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used for

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for 88%. The

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rank is Africa which comprises about 84% and the

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of agricultural

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of

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in South East

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is slightly lower than

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(81%).

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contributes 71%

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. Compared to South

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, North

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and Europe only have around half

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of

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in South

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for agriculture.

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, these two districts have about 50% in industrial

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, which are 48% and 53% respectively. Other

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small

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industrial

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, especially

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Central

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only has 5%.

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, all of these

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areas

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have less than 20%

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domestic

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. South

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has the largest

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in

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field which is 19% and Central

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has the least

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same as South East

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(7%).

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these

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charts, the

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which are including many developed countries will have a larger

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of

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use

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in industry development.

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, the districts which contain many developing countries are using more

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for developing agriculture. Compared to these two purposes, domestic

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occupies the least

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in

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water

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use

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.