Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
These days, gifts are common and they are usually appreciated by the recipients. Some people believe that money is the best present for the youth while others argue that financial aids towards education or vocational skills acquisition are the most important gifts to youngsters. I support
this
latter view.
In conclusion, so the money would help the youths meet their immediate needs, I believe that in the long-run, technical and educational grants are the best presents.As a result
, contributions toward financing youngsters' education and skills acquisition should be encouraged.Submitted by hamdislam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite