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An increased number of people today change their career more than once in their lives. What are the reasons of this trend? Is it a positive or negative development?

#people #change #career #lives #trend #development
The post-modern era has created
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 variety of
job
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jobs
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 that can be chosen;
hence
people
 can
change
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career
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careers
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different
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differently
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 from their current
occupation
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occupations
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. The psychological issue is considerable in
this
 phenomenon.
Although
 it has several disadvantages, I strongly believe that it offers
more
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 positive impact
to
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 our society. The main reason
of
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 the aforementioned issue is that
people
 usually consider their talent after their adulting era.
For example
,
people
 who live in developing countries
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have
lack
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 of psychological assistance when they are teenagers. As a
consequences
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, they
do
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 not convinced about what they want in the future
due to
 the knowledge of the world that they do not have. It results in
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hesitation about the
career
 that they want to choose. Some
people
 discover it when they are already working so that they
change
 their
career
 immediately to
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 to their talent when they are adults. The issue is abominable for
same
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 reason related to their physical power.
For some
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Some
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people
, especially
people
 who
change
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careers
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 at the age
above
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of
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 30, may have difficulties
to maintain
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maintaining
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 their performance. It may decrease their achievement
due to
 the
unachived
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unachieved
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 target, commonly in
business
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 field.
As a result
, the decision not only
worsen
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worsens
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 their
career
,
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apply
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 but
also
 makes their salary
fell
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.
However
, changing
job
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jobs
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 is profitable if we determine it wisely. Many
people
 who live in less-developed countries which often have
less
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fewer
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 specific
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jobs
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 offered are better
to
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off changing
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change
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jobs
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 to the professional sector.
For instance
, archaeologists
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who
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 have
less
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fewer
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job
vacancy
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vacancies
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 are better
to take
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off taking
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the
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apply
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job
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jobs
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 in developed countries
such
 as the USA rather than being
a
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salesman
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salesmen
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 in their native country.
As a result
, the proficient person is increased
due to
 the number of excellent
people
 who
involve
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are involved
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 in the field. In conclusion, teenagers who have no psychological assistance
are
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often doubt
about
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their
career
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careers
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;
hence
 they
change
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job
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jobs
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at
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to
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 adults. Even though It may disguise their bright future, I am confident that the phenomenon may
give
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positive
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a positive
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 impact
to
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on
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the
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society
due to
 the increase of
the
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experts.
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