Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

The debate over a

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’s moral education is difficult due to the various view points each party holds. The question of discipline is exceptionally important,

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whether to treat good

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with a neutral attitude or to just focus on correcting incorrect actions. My personal opinion is that any positive actions ought to be immediately recognised by the parent and vice versa for negative conduct.

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balanced approach makes for a more positive outcome for both the

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and family.

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rewarding a good act immediately signals a positive reaction in the

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brain, which

should encourage the

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to want to behave

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similarly

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. Failure to recognise

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behaviour

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leaves the

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with the same emotional feeling as if they had done nothing.

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Therefore, rewarding

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regularly for good

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enforces the

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action, making

it more likely to repeat itself in the

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.

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punishing the son or daughter is

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necessary, failure to discipline could have serious consequences in the

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.

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example, if

a

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has no clear concept of respect for elders or authority it is quite possible to encounter more serious problems later in life.

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pattern is prevalent in marginal neighbourhoods throughout the world.

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Therefore, it

is essential to immediately discipline the

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whenever witnessing an unruly act so as to enforce the correct

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from an early age.

To conclude both

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To conclude, both

bad and good actions need to be recognised and dealt with immediately to correct or encourage the

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actions. Failure to do either of these could result in a less fortunate life or a youth who rarely performs any good acts for anyone.

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Therefore, it

is critical that both types of

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are recognised dealt with

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for the benefit of the

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in the

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