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Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of UK citizens who consume recommended quantity of
fruit
 and vegetables on
daily basis
Suggestion
a daily basis
, between the year 2002 and 2010. It can be observed that the percentage of women who ate advised amount of
fruit
 and vegetables was just 25% in the beginning.
This
 figure rose drastically to reach the peak of 32% in 2006, before falling back to 26% in 2010. In terms of men and children eating
fruit
 and vegetable, the trend is relatively stable and started at 23% and 11% respectively. While the rate for men found a slight increment by 4% in 2006, children witnessed a better growth and reached 18%.
However
,
this
 growth was less when compared to that of the women in the same year. From
this
 point, the values for both the categories declined by exactly 2% each and
finally
 settled at 24% and 16% respectively in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that women are the top consumers of
fruit
 and vegetables, followed by men. In spite of a significant increase of children eating these foods, the ratio is low in comparison to the counterparts.

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