Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Now a days everyone of us is having a
screen
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in our hand and it is widely used for entertainment
such
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as watching movies. Many people prefer to watch movies on their
phone
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in free
time but
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time, but
some people don't watch it on their
phone
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as they prefer to watch it on big
screen
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at
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in
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cinema
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a cinema
the cinema
cinemas
. We will discuss
merits
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the merits
and demerits of both the options in following
paragrahphs
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
. Watching
movie
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on
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phone
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the phone
is
good option
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a good option
, you can watch it at anytime
,
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,
anywhere in your free time.
it
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It
is
also
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not costly. You don't need to plan it in advance to watch a
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movie
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movie, however
however
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in my opinion
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
not worth. Where as watching a
movie
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on
big
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the big screen
a big screen
screen
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with a great sound effect makes a lot of difference in your enjoyment rather than watching it on your
phone
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. In
cinema
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,
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,
you don't have any distractions and you can watch it with peaceful mind.
the
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The
picture quality in
cinema
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is great. You can watch it along with your friends or
familiy
a social unit living together
family
which is very
dificult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
to do on your
phone
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or tablet. Every new
movie
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first
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released on
cinema
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then
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it is released on other media so you
can not
can not
cannot
watch any newly released
movie
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on
small
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the small screen
a small screen
screen
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this
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is another limitation of watching
moview
a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement
movies
movie
on
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phone
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the phone
or tablet.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
in my opinion watching
moview on
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movie won
big
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a big screen
screen
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of
cinema
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is always a fun and entertaining rather than watching it on any other small device.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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