Should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?

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Many assert that not voting is a fundamental
right
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, a free expression of political discontent. Some go as far as to say that compulsory voting is worse than being denied a
vote
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and a violation of rights. Legal cases have been brought in
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
of the
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not to
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vote but
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vote, but
to date no court has enforced it. Should it be true that the
right
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to
vote
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could be waived and
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in itself be a
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not to
vote
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and deserve constitutional protection? If so could other basic rights be waived? The minimum wage? Equal employment? Hill argues that legal recognition of the
right
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not to
vote
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is a dangerous path to tread. The
right
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to
vote
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is an individual
liberty but
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liberty, but
crucially a collective
right
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at the core of democracy. Without political participation
from
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society, government, public interests, security and the very fabric of society would be at stake. Vulnerable social groups would lose their voices; failure to
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could bring political oppression and far greater infringements to personal freedom. Hill
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reasons that voting is a
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and a duty; key to the structure and values of society, a moral responsibility and more important than an individual’s
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not to
vote
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. So voluntary voting systems can continue to allow abstention, compulsory systems can have
exemptions but
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exemptions, but
as Hill states
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“will not — and should not — constitute the exercise of any particular
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,” and “doing so would endanger — and possibly destroy — the system for which it exists: representative democracy.”
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