The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globalization

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is the process of interaction and integration of people, organization and government. There is

ongoing debate

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an ongoing debate

that due to

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globalization

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globalization, culture

culture

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will diminish. In

this

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essay, I shall provide my point of view by

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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

both sides of the argument. There are several reasons why

globalization

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affects

culture

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and why it is in danger? One of them is that in

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era of quick

transportation tourism

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transportation, tourism

is quite easy. When people from one region come to meet with other region, they will adapt changes and learn other’s

culture

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, it is possible that they forget about their own

culture

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and adapt other

culture

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. Though, the change is good for human

beings but

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beings, but

some people take it as a threat to the

culture

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. Those people who argue that

globalization

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will not inevitably disappear the

culture

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has

different point

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a different point

of view and say that it is actually a good thing. People from different origin mix together and talked about their

culture

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and habits. They share various ideas, while discussing

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about

these things, the importance of

culture

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will be reflected. Without the discussion, they take the

culture

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for granted. While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case my personal view is that in

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era of quick transportation and telecommunication all the world is now a global village. So, from the

globalization

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people will learn from each other.

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culture

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will be identified

and tagged with them

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and tagged them with

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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238 words

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The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, many people are likely to over use internet and some of them even become addicted to it. What are reason for this? What problem can be cause by internet over use?

What are the reasons behind rising crime rates in urban areas, and what solutions could reduce this trend

Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. while others think that it should not start until seven years of age, discuss both you and give your opinion.

Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines . Does it bring more advantages or disadvantages ?