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The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globalization
 is the process of interaction and integration of people, organization and government. There is
ongoing debate
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an ongoing debate
 that due to
globalization
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globalization, culture
culture
 will diminish. In
this
 essay, I shall provide my point of view by
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 both sides of the argument. There are several reasons why
globalization
 affects
culture
 and why it is in danger? One of them is that in
this
 era of quick
transportation tourism
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transportation, tourism
 is quite easy. When people from one region come to meet with other region, they will adapt changes and learn other’s
culture
.
Hence
, it is possible that they forget about their own
culture
 and adapt other
culture
. Though, the change is good for human
beings but
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beings, but
 some people take it as a threat to the
culture
. Those people who argue that
globalization
 will not inevitably disappear the
culture
 has
different point
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a different point
 of view and say that it is actually a good thing. People from different origin mix together and talked about their
culture
 and habits. They share various ideas, while discussing
on
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about
 these things, the importance of
culture
 will be reflected. Without the discussion, they take the
culture
 for granted. While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case my personal view is that in
this
 era of quick transportation and telecommunication all the world is now a global village. So, from the
globalization
 people will learn from each other.
Hence
,
culture
 will be identified
and tagged with them
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and tagged them with
.
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