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Around the world, solar energy is becoming a more popular source of energy for many households. Why do you think this is so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using solar energy to power one’s home?

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One of the greatest threats to modern day living is the depletion of the sources that provide us the
energy
 to maintain our lives. Most of the world’s current
energy
 needs get fulfilled from fossil fuels.
However
, fossil fuels like petroleum and coal come at a price. They do not only cost us
money but
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money, but
also
 degrade our environment by polluting it.
Moreover
, these sources of
energy
 are nowhere close to being renewable and according to some scholars, are at the brink of extinction. Because of the above mentioned issues, renewable sources of
energy
 like solar
power
 are getting popularised at an unprecedented rate. Using solar
power
 as a source of household
energy
 has its own unique advantages. Once harnessed, solar
energy
 has virtually no operational cost;
this
 makes it a cheaper option as compared to the other sources of
energy
.
Secondly
, the process of harnessing
energy
 from the sun does not result in any harm to the environment; it is completely pollution free.
However
, every coin has two sides. There are some disadvantages of using solar
power
 as a source of domestic
energy
, too.
Firstly
, the semiconductors used in converting solar
power
 into electricity are made up of expensive metals,
thus
 making it costlier to install a solar
power
 system.
Secondly
, solar
power
 systems are hard to maintain because they are made up of glass. Any dust on them obstructs the reflection of sunlight and
consequently
 makes the solar
power
 systems inefficient to run.
Lastly
, solar
power
 systems can only
productively
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produce
 work
at
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in
 locations where there is plenty of sunshine all year round.
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