Describe a language you would like to learn .you should say. What the language is Where is it spoken Why are you learn it Explain why are you interested in studying another language

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Let me tell you about a language I have always wanted to learn
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which is Russian
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It is spoken in Russian
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obviously
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in many other countries which have been influenced by Russian including places like Mongolia and Kazakhstan
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The reason I would like to learn Russian is that the energy industry is huge and there are lots of jobs
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A lot of country oil and gas comes from Russia so it is really useful to be able to speak that language if you want to work in the energy
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And I know that a lot of Russian can't speak English very
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The problem is I am already in my thirties and I have spent more than ten years learning English
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I don't know if I would ever be able to study Russian because it uses a completely different alphabet and sounds really difficult
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But it would be really nice to have the chance to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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