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NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE FOREIGN STUDENTS ARE GOING TO ENGLISH – SPEAKING COUNTRIES TO LEARN THE “ INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE – ENGLISH”. IT IS UNDOUBTEDLY TRUE THAT STUDYING ENGLISH IN AN ENGLISH SPEAKING COUNTRY IS THE BEST WAY, BUT IT IS NOT THE ONLY WAY TO LEARN IT. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE ABOVE STATEMENT?

#students #english #countries #language #english” #country
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THERE IS NO DEBATE THAT BEING IN A REAL
ENGLISH
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LANGUAGE
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 ENVIRONMENT WILL HELP ANYONE TO MASTER THE
LANGUAGE
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 IN THE FATEST AND MOST EFFECTIVE WAY AND MANY INTERNATINAL STUDENTS PREFER TO GO TO
ENGLISH
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 SPEAKING COUNTRIES TO STUDY AND LEARN THE INTERNATIONAL
LANGUAGE
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. I AGREE THAT
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 IS A GOOD WAY, YET STUDENTS CAN LEARN
ENGLISH
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 IN OTHER USEFUL WAYS AND THOSE CAN BE EVEN BETTER THAN THE
FIRST
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 APPROACH. BEING IN AN
ENGLISH
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 SPEAKING
COUNTRY
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 HELPS STUDENTS LEARN
ENGLISH
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 IN MANY WAYS.
FIRSTLY
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, THE SURROUNDINGS AND ENVIRONMENT OUR LEARNING.
SECONDLY
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 QUICK LEARNING OF THE
LANGUAGE
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 CAN BECOME A STRONG MOTIVATION. THE
ENGLISH
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LANGUAGE
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 LEARNING OPPORTUNITIES ARE AVAILABLE IN MANY COUNTRIES. NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO FIND VARIOUS WAYS OF LEARNING THE
ENGLISH
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LANGUAGE
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 IN THEIR HOME
COUNTRY
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 THAT ARE HIGHLY EFFECTIVE AND PRODUCTIVE. WATCHING
ENGLISH
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 MOVIES, TELEVISION, LISTENING TO
ENGLISH
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 MUSIC AN BROWSING INTERNET CAN OPEN UP A VAST PLETHORA OF
ENGLISH
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 MATERIALS. IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE STUDYING
ENGLISH
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ENGLISH SPEAKING
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ENGLISH, SPEAKING
COUNTRY
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 IS A GOOD WAY BUT IN MANY CASES, THE OTHER WAYS CAN BE PROVEN TO BE MORE EFFICIENT THAT BEING IN AN
ENGLISH
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 SPEAKING
COUNTRY
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