Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them continue with their work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people are of the opinion that artists who do not earn a decent income should be supported by the

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. I do not agree with

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point of view because I believe

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funding should be spent on pressing social problems and

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because artists can find alternative sources of income to support themselves.

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funding should be used to deal with pressing problems rather than support artists. Investment in the art industry contributes little to improving the standard of living of the general public. Art, after all, has been considered as luxury item by the majority of people and has nothing to do with their everyday life.

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, education and health care are more closely related to people’s

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a contented state of being happy and healthy and prosperous

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. By pouring more money

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can make education more affordable and accessible for young people and

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provide them better opportunities for their future employment. At the same time, state funding

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enables medical facilities function properly and

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can offer better health services to citizens. All these improvements contribute to the betterment of people’s lives.

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, like any other

professionals artists

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professionals, artists

can find other financial resources and support themselves.

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with, artists can cooperate with other organizations and companies by providing creative ideas and graphic designs.

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helps them to earn extra income and reduce their reliance on

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help. Another point is that artists nowadays can take advantages of the modern technology

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as social media networking to promote their own artworks and sell them worldwide. To conclude, in my perspective,

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funding should be spent on education and health care so as to benefit more people and artists should find alternative financial resources by selling their creative ideas and artworks.