Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is considered by some that be accepting of bad situations in their life is the best way to face them, while others emphasise that

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the best

solution is to direct effort to resolve problems.

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essay discusses both perspectives, and why I think that when negative circumstances occur, we should try to seek solutions.

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reason, why people accept being in a difficult situation is that they do not have an impact on what happened to them and sometimes are not able to change the situation. In

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case, the best what they can do is to be accepting of a difficult

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, children from poor families, who live in the countryside, probably do not have any possibility to solve the problem of money shortage.

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,

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of dwelling on how miserable their

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is, these children can accept that they do not have so many toys like their peers.

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solution will help them to maintain a good mood and enjoy their childhood.

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, some say that even in a serious predicament, we should always try to seek any solutions. According to

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way of thinking, children from the previous example can find a job that can be done after school,

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as taking neighbours' dogs out for a walk or picking seasonal fruits during the holiday. Since they earn some extra money the will can not only effort to buy a favourite

toy but

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toy, but

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they will learn how to be responsible for their own money.

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, looking for the way to improve the

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can be a valuable lesson and

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relatively large in size or number or extent; larger than others of its kind

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opportunity to gain new skills. In conclusion, it is undoubted that both sides have

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merit

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, I believe it is better to always make an effort to change a difficult situation because it not only increases the likelihood of success and being in a better

position

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but

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can teach us something valuable. So, as we can see finding solutions to our problems is much more beneficial than accepting them.