Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is considered by some that be accepting of bad situations in their life is the best way to face them, while others emphasise that
better
Suggestion
the best
solution is to direct effort to resolve problems.
This
essay discusses both perspectives, and why I think that when negative circumstances occur, we should try to seek solutions.
First
reason, why people accept being in a difficult situation is that they do not have an impact on what happened to them and sometimes are not able to change the situation. In
this
case, the best what they can do is to be accepting of a difficult
position
.
For instance
, children from poor families, who live in the countryside, probably do not have any possibility to solve the problem of money shortage.
However
,
instead
of dwelling on how miserable their
position
is, these children can accept that they do not have so many toys like their peers.
This
solution will help them to maintain a good mood and enjoy their childhood.
On the other hand
, some say that even in a serious predicament, we should always try to seek any solutions. According to
this
way of thinking, children from the previous example can find a job that can be done after school,
such
as taking neighbours' dogs out for a walk or picking seasonal fruits during the holiday. Since they earn some extra money the will can not only effort to buy a favourite
toy but
Accept comma addition
toy, but
also
they will learn how to be responsible for their own money.
In other words
, looking for the way to improve the
position
can be a valuable lesson and
greate
relatively large in size or number or extent; larger than others of its kind
great
greater
greet
opportunity to gain new skills. In conclusion, it is undoubted that both sides have
merits
Suggestion
merit
.
However
, I believe it is better to always make an effort to change a difficult situation because it not only increases the likelihood of success and being in a better
position
but
also
can teach us something valuable. So, as we can see finding solutions to our problems is much more beneficial than accepting them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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