It is better have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor.

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Human beings are social creatures and they communicate with each other in many different ways. While some people think having clever friends is better, others believe having friends having a good
sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
in better. In my point of view, having friends with a
sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
is more valuable. In the following paragraphs, I will illustrate
this
point of view.
To begin
with,
having
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will fun, friends help
will fun friends help
have fun friends helped
are fun friends helping
were fun friends helping
were fun friends helped
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fun
friends help us to relieve our stress and become happy. Today's society is increasingly developed and no one cannot catch it.
Therefore
, encountering with
this
amount of change is much
stressful
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more stressful
. Having
fun friends
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fun, friends
help
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helps
us to escape from
this
hard situation and have a happy time. My own experience is a compelling example of
this
. My father died when I was 13 years old.
Hence
, I became
depresses
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depressed
and could not study my lessons;
as a result
, my grade was getting lower. My teacher suggested I attend the theatre team at school. I enrolled and find a good
friend
there. She was very funny and led me to learn new interesting hobbies like gardening and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
;
accordingly
, we went to Shiraz. We were taking more pictures in every historical place and meet new people, and
also
tourists from china. We speak in other languages with them and it helped me to forget my problem and reduced my stress.
Therefore
, I became happy and my grades increased after two months.
Secondly
, by having a
friend
that has a good
sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
we are more likely to find a proper
job
with a high
salary
in the future. People with a good
sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
are more social.
Therefore
, they have more friends and connections that can help us to find an appropriate
job
as soon as possible.
For instance
, my sister's friends are more
fun
and when she has an interview in the railway industry her
friend
helps her landing
job
interview that its
salary
was very high. According to
this
example, we notice that having a
fun
friend
helps us to find a good
job
with a high
salary
. In conclusion, the
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above mentioned
reasons lead us to conclude that having friends with a good
sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
is more beneficial. It helps us not only to relax and become
happy but
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happy, but
also
to find a proper
job
with a high
salary
.

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