The best way to help developing countries is to give them financial aid. Write an essay either agreeing or disagreeing with this statement. Suggest alternatives to this policy.

It is argued that perfect method to assist a growing

nations

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nation

is to grant them monetary aid to raise their economic.

Likewise

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,

economic

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economics

economically

helps them to

boast

increase

boost

their infrastructure.

Although

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it has a positive side to them, but it still

has is

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has been

is being

disadvantages

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disadvantaged

. I disagree that helping with finance is the top routine

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In my opinion, I believe that alternative policy can be a better option to aid underdeveloped nations. The demerits of financing a progressing

nations

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nation

is corruption.

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is because, a group of people would dear somewhere and embrace the funds

to

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for

themselves alone without spending it on the infrastructure that they are meant to use it on. Take

for example

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, in the year 2006, World Bank

,

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,

gave the formal President of Nigeria, Olusegun Obasanjo

,

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,

billions of

naria

used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs

more

neural

to invest

on

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in

the

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country

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country's

economy, rather

him

objective male pronoun, used to refer to a male human or animal

he

and his counterpart spent it on their private use only, which they are ought to use it on the nation's economy.

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,

this

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led to embezzlement of public funds.

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, contributing capital to support underdeveloped nations is not the supreme means.

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, educational sector can be the perfect option to growing countries because the young people acquire more experience to improve their

country

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. Take

for instance

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, if a developed nation organised a scholarship for the youths of a poor

countries

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country

,

this

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process would boost their economic and development their

country

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. They will acquire a detail knowledge as long as they study and get more experience on how to

love

inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of

live

in advanced countries.

As a result

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, they come back to build their own nation and develop it with the knowledge they already have.

Thus

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, it

is is

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

possible that gaining

foriegn

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

experience can improve the

country

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. In conclusion, I believe that financial support results to another consequence like fraudulence. For that reason, I prefer

alternative policy

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an alternative policy, such

an alternative policy such

such

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as academic improvement as an aid to expanding nations. The young people in the

country

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should be educated.