The best way to help developing countries is to give them financial aid. Write an essay either agreeing or disagreeing with this statement. Suggest alternatives to this policy.
It is argued that perfect method to assist a growing
nations
is to grant them monetary aid to raise their economic. Suggestion
nation
Likewise
, economic
helps them to Suggestion
economics
economically
boast
their infrastructure. increase
boost
Although
it has a positive side to them, but it still has is
Suggestion
has been
is being
disadvantages
. I disagree that helping with finance is the top routineSuggestion
disadvantaged
.
In my opinion, I believe that alternative policy can be a better option to aid underdeveloped nations.
The demerits of financing a progressing Accept space
.
nations
is corruption. Suggestion
nation
This
is because, a group of people would dear somewhere and embrace the funds to
themselves alone without spending it on the infrastructure that they are meant to use it on. Take Suggestion
for
for example
, in the year 2006, World Bank ,
gave the formal President of Nigeria, Olusegun ObasanjoAccept space
,
,
billions of Accept space
,
naria
to invest used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
neural
on
the Suggestion
in
country
economy, rather Suggestion
country's
him
and his counterpart spent it on their private use only, which they are ought to use it on the nation's economy. objective male pronoun, used to refer to a male human or animal
he
As a result
, this
led to embezzlement of public funds. Hence
, contributing capital to support underdeveloped nations is not the supreme means.
However
, educational sector can be the perfect option to growing countries because the young people acquire more experience to improve their country
. Take for instance
, if a developed nation organised a scholarship for the youths of a poor countries
, Suggestion
country
this
process would boost their economic and development their country
. They will acquire a detail knowledge as long as they study and get more experience on how to love
in advanced countries. inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
As a result
, they come back to build their own nation and develop it with the knowledge they already have. Thus
, it is is
possible that gaining have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
foriegn
experience can improve the of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
country
.
In conclusion, I believe that financial support results to another consequence like fraudulence. For that reason, I prefer alternative policy
Suggestion
an alternative policy, such
an alternative policy such
such
as academic improvement as an aid to expanding nations. The young people in the country
should be educated.Submitted by funmi_veron on
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