Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by thr government or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? give reasons for your answer and relevant examples.
It is commonly observed phenomenon that progress and development of
amy
country one or some or every or all without specification
any
is depends
on the level of Suggestion
depend
education
and health of its citizens. A handful of people reckons that whether government
can invest Suggestion
the government
money
to provide these kind of facilities free of charge
Accept comma addition
charge, such
such
as medical facility
as well as Suggestion
as a medical facility
education
, or people ought to understand their responsibilty
to get these the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
sevices
by paying.
To open the deliberation side, there are two prominent factors say that why performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
devices
government
should focus on this
side, first
of all, there are countless people, who are not capable to purchase medicine in order to secure their life
. In Suggestion
lives
this
case, government
should help them by providing funds for their health, for
example in
the USA, it is Accept comma addition
example, in
basic right
of every citizen to availed free healthcare treatment. Suggestion
a basic right
the basic right
As a result
, individuals have better conditions of health. Moreover
, children, who want to acquire education
, and they want to go to school like Suggestion
an education
another
children, but their parents cannot afford it for their children, so not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
government
must check it and provide funds that they collect from industries, transportation system and so on as a tax. Suggestion
the government
Then
some part of money
Suggestion
government money can
government
can invest on
Suggestion
in
school system
. As a Suggestion
the school system
a school system
school systems
consequences
, Suggestion
consequence
illiteracy rate
Suggestion
the illiteracy rate
from
any country can be reduced.
On the Suggestion
of
paradoxicle
side, higher seemingly contradictory but nonetheless possibly true
paradoxical
education
and expensive healthcare
treatments should be paid by citizens themselves, because most of people have too much Suggestion
health care
money
, so they can easily take medicine facility and can provide better education
to their children, Therefore
, government
should invest money
on poor people, who have no more money
and income sources, rather than on rich people. Apart from this
, government
will not have to invest more Suggestion
the government
money
on these services and can easily concentrate on another
work to provide services to individuals not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
such
as better road facilties
and agriculture facilities.
To conclude, a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
althought
most of people believe that people should pay even though, in spite of the fact that
although
money
to get medicine or education
, but it is also
trust
of Suggestion
trusting
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
individuals
Suggestion
individuals, government
individual government
individual individual government
individuals' government
government
should provide funds to serve these facilities to individuals, if people will spend better lifestyle and take education
, then
it will great opportunity to reduce illitracy rate
and illness of people.Suggestion
the illiteracy rate
illiteracy rate
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