Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past.
Everyone needs a good
relationships
between their families. Nowadays, the life has changed totally than before. Family relations Suggestion
relationship
is
one of the changes. In Suggestion
are
this
essey
I will argue that there are some reasons to rise an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
this
problem and effects on society.
There are many causes why faimlies
are not close-knit. a social unit living together
families
females
Firstly
, most of parents
have jobs. Suggestion
the parents
To
instance, they spend Suggestion
For
long time
in their work and less and less time in taking care of their children. The biggest problem when the parents have adolescents or Suggestion
a long time
teengager
because they need more attention to start their lives in a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenager
teenagers
good way
. Suggestion
a good way
good ways
the good way
Secondly
, the majority of this
issue is developing of technology. For example
, children use
gadgets for a long time even
if they stay with their parents. Accept comma addition
time, even
Also
, because there are a variety of tools like iphone
, Suggestion
iPhone
ipad
, Suggestion
iPad
ipod
, it is easy to (trademark) a pocket-sized device used to play music files
iPod
use
them anywhere and anytime. Finally
, each family whether
is extended or immediate has some family issue. In fact, when they have different opinions, they prefer to become not close with Accept comma addition
family, whether
other
to avoid the problems.
any of various alternatives; some other
another
This
issue has drawbacks affecting the society. The children can use
illegal things easily. For example
, they do not have attention from thier
parents, the children can take drugs, alcohol, or they are shoplifting. of them or themselves
their
Furthermore
, with use
the techonolgy
people forget communication skills. To illustrate, when people meet others, they cannot speak fluently face to face and they cannot express what they want to say. the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
In addition
, elderly parents cannot take care of themsleves
, they need someone to help them and with family issues most reflexive form of "them"
themselves
chlidren
put their parents in nursing home.
To sum up, parents should pay attention the relations between their children. a young person of either sex
children
Also
, parents should take care about children’s
upbringing.Suggestion
the children’s
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