Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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The number of people visiting places with difficult conditions is increasing day by day. Of late, more people are keen on visiting

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places for a different experience that comes along with the challenges they get to face.

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with, it is the social media which

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are playing

a major role in making people aware of a large number of tourist places that

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would not have had much knowledgeable off unless they are related to the place and these areas would usually be famous in the

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place for their

specialties

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and challenges. So once awareness is created about the existence of an interesting destination, the curiosity to visit and explore the location develops.

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instigates

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to move out of their comfort zone and pay a visit.

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, a television channel

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research

and telecast about an island in a far off sea. The way of presentation and narration tends to catch the interest of the viewers who will plan a trip to the island as a weekend getaway.

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problem that comes along with the thrill of exploring

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less explored places is the unforeseen scenarios that

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might get to face.

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, the weather conditions might not fall in line with our prediction, the ground reality could be different from the attire and preparations we made.

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, when we visit an island in the middle of the sea, we would have planned for a pleasant boat ride, calm waves, and a brightly shining sun. But due to an unforeseen change in the weather condition, there can be turbulences during the boat ride, waves could be harsh and the sky could get cloudy. In conclusion, while there is an increase in the tourist count

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places with difficult conditions for the thrill and excitement it promises to give, it might not always be feasible due to

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the onslaught

onslaught

and unplanned circumstances.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

321 words

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breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
climate change
environmental degradation
economically disadvantaged areas
physical health
harsh weather
difficult terrain
limited access to medical facilities
fragile ecosystems
habitat destruction
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that the main influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

An increasing number of children are overweight, which could result in many problems when they grow older, both in terms of their health and healthcare costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Some people think that too much money and time have been allocated to scientific research. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it didn't work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager in your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment. Explain what happened when you called the shop. say what you would like the manger to do