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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you

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While some people believe that it may be better to study during the night all at once only some days before the
test
, others think that it is worth to have regular intervals of studies. There are advantages and disadvantages of studying during the night all at once and having
short period
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a short period
 of studying every day.
First
 of all, nocturnal study allows students to have a calm environment. It helps them to focus more on the subject being studied even if there
are
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is
 a lot of material to go through in a short time span. It is a wholly
silent which
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silent, which
 may make them to have a better comprehension about what it is being studied. When I was at the college, I remember going through the syllabus days before the
test
. It helped me a lot because under these
condition
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conditions
 I could ingrain the matter
,
Accept space
,
hence
 I received high scores.
However
, there are people who believe that having
short period
Suggestion
short periods
a short period
 of studies every day may be crucial for the subject fathoming. As a matter of fact, they may be somewhat useful at
first
, but one may end up forgetting the syllabus afterward,
therefore
 failing the
test
.
Finally
, among the advantages and disadvantages of studying patterns, I definitely choose night studies few days before the
test
. In my opinion,
that is
 the best way to memorize the material through
having refresh mind
Suggestion
the having refresh mind
.
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