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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

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In
this
 contemporary era, it has become difficult for masses
to maintain
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maintain
 balance between their
official
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office
 and family
life
. There essay shall discuss
causes
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the causes
 behind
this
phenomen
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
phenomena
 and several steps which can be taken to resolve
this
 issue. On the
hand there
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hand, there
 are a variety of reasons why people are not able to distribute their
time
 in
life
 effectively.
Firstly
, family expectations
has soared
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have soared
 really high. Workers usually
work
over
work done in addition to regular working hours
overtime
time
 to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
 the requirements of
feach
(used of count nouns) every one considered individually
each
 family member.
For instance
, expensive car has become a social status symbol and to achieve that individuals dedicate most of their
time
 to
work
.
Secondly
, stress at
work
 place is another factor which is
playin
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
 a critical role. Managers set
unacheiveable
impossible to achieve
unachievable
 sales targets and
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
 exert pressure on staff to perform beyond their limits.
Moreover
, basic
necessitites
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
 of
life
 like food and shelter have become quite expensive to afford so people require to
work
 more nowadays. Despite the factors mentioned above, numerous remedies can be considered to maintain
work
life
 balance. One step could be that government should implement strict laws against excessive over
time
 and limit for minimum wages of labours. A worker can
work
 only for
fourty
being ten more than thirty
forty
 hours per week in England and
rest
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the rest
 of the
time
 is for his family
for example
. Another possible measure is that organizations could help their employees by giving handsome salary so that they can provide better social
life
to
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for
 the family. Managers can play an effective role to give relief to their staff by giving
freindly
characteristic of or befitting a friend
friendly
 environment and realistic tasks and targets. In conclusion,
although
 a great deal of factors can be attributed to
disturbed
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disturb
social
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the social life
life
 of people, remedies like limiting over
time limit
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the time limit
 and salary
increament
a process of becoming larger or longer or more numerous or more important
increment
increments
 by the enterprises can play a major role in providing a healthy connection between
life
 and
work
.
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