Prevention is better than Cure. Researching and treating disease is too coslty So it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what Extent you are agree with this statement

Medical treatments and new curable methods research i

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are

too costly nowadays. So most of the people believe that prevent the

disease

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from occurring is better way

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of treating after spreading In a certain way, I am agreeing with the above statement, but at the same time I am of opinion that medical research is essential to find the possible treatments for the

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for which we have not yet.

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with, it’s not possible to prevent country from all the dangerous

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. Some of the countries are

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nder

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below

poverty line till the date and People come under that don’t able to afford good and hygienic food. i

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high chances that they people get sick. It’s impossible for any country to prevent

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totally so it’s better to invest o

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in

Research and find valuable Solutions.

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the past two years

many of Indian people died of swine f

lu but

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flu, but

after researching they s

uccfully

in a thankful manner; with thanks

thankfully

got the solution of

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disease

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and safe their people. On the other side, we should take n

ecessity

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necessary

steps to avoid spreading of

disease

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. We all know medical treatment is too expensive and not every middle class person able to afford it. Some

disease

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is spread person to person or generation to generation. To avoid

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it’s important to implement well planned and systematic approach.o

ne

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polio. Many countries w

as suffered

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were suffering

were suffered

due to polio

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, but after well planning and researching highly populated countries like India and c

hina

a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world

China

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got success over dangerous

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polio. At

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, in my o

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opinion, both

prevention and medical research for are equally important, so that we can cure the

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when countries people suffered from that particular medical condition.