Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether the organization helps face in great needs or focus on their citizens.
This
essay will examine two views and conclude with my own opinion. On the one hand, some people believe that they should help to face
in
Suggestion
with
an emergency situation.
Firstly
, they should help people or countries that have experienced horrible natural disasters or accidents. It is because nowadays, the whole world is closer, so, if a
country
in need is faced danger, we can encounter other dangers.
For example
, Australia has been faced forest fire in former days. It is lead to thousands of animals and insects are dead.
This
situation could influence our biodiversity.
Secondly
, we have duty in helping a developing
country
. There are many infectious diseases, starvation, and shortage of water in Africa. From
this
point of view, we should help the big problems that arise outside the
country
.
On the other hand
, I believe that we should focus on helping people in our
country
. Primarily, they could be good assets for the
country
. It is because good quality of the population is competing in a whole world.
For example
, if we help poor children and their families, when they have a grown up, the children could be great workforce.
Second
, based a long term, concentrating on people who could be helpful others.
This
is because if we could help of them, they could have potential which can help other people or countries better. In conclusion,
although
we could help huge problems, I think we should more focus on our
country
and society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bonding
  • cognitive development
  • multisensory learning
  • narratives
  • foster
  • empathy
  • vicarious experiences
  • storytelling
  • screen time
  • interpretation
  • media literacy
  • language acquisition
  • innate curiosity
  • scaffolding
  • imaginative play
  • literary appreciation
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