Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Nowadays there are certain people who think, that if an individual is having a single
career his
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career, his
growth is being compromised rather he would have been advancing at much higher rates if he would have been working under multiple careers of several ways of earning money. I
am completely support
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am completely supporting
have completely supported
completely support
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vision. In the earlier days, the cost of living was very low and
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the economy was stagnant, Which means only limited resources were required to keep living well off. Individuals were more into making an
expertise
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expert
in
one
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field to have an edge over their competition. The jobs were sufficient to cover all
there
of them or themselves
their
day to the needs.
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: My father
was
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has been
a banker since the beginning till the end of his career and he was content about that. But nowadays it is an antiquated idea of making oneself a pioneer of a specific field because
this
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is a generation of multitasking where in you need to have adequate knowledge of each and everything
that is
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related to the work you are into.
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working upon several avenues will create
much
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many
more opportunities than working under
one
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head.
This
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is a generation of aggressive competition. People with
archaic idea
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archaic ideas
an archaic idea
of single career are more prone to failures than
one
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with numerous careers. An example from my personal experience would give a glimpse of the same: My colleague at work is a Financial accountant and gets all his living from the Job whereas I am working as a freelance website developer along with the same job which entail helps me in earning almost double the amount that he is earning. In conclusion, I would like to say that it is ideal to get into multiple streams of work rather than sailing into
one
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. It will not only provide you with the enough financial capability but it will
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open new doors of wonder in the future

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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