The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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that are sold are recycled.
The process consists of seven steps, starting with the Use synonyms
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being taken to special containers to be separated from the other types of refuse. After that, Use synonyms
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flatten them.
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furled to a thickness between 2.5mm and 6.0mm, depending on what it is going to be used for. The Linking Words
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cans
now are ready to be recycled into new packaging, namely; as drink containers. Use synonyms
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