Some people argues that technology invention such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

Certain people
says
Suggestion
say
that, due to the advancement in
technology
like smart phones, humans are socially connected less likely. It is true that, nowadays lots of people are spending too much of time on social media rather than having a face-to-face communication.
This
essay agrees
to
Suggestion
with
the statement made that, many of the humans are not connecting socially.
This
essay will discuss about why humans are not having a face-to-face interaction.
In addition
, it will
also
discuss about what are
consequences
Suggestion
the consequences
.
To begin
with, number of mankind from younger to older ages, they are meeting on social media like Whatsapp and Facebook to interact with their close relation who are in any part of the world.
This
makes communication faster & easier, due to an enhancement in
technology
.
For example
, one of my cousin who lives in Australia for his higher studies can get interactive with my parents & relatives through the social media.
This
is accessible due to the
technology
. So that, we get to know about his health & education.
Secondly
, the effects of
technology
,
such
as mobiles, have curse impact on one's life, which leads to problems like health & psychological issues.
Moreover
, the ages from children to senior citizens are not communicated with each other facial, as earlier people were gathering together & sharing their knowledge, experience & fun moments.
This
part
is seems
Suggestion
seems
has seemed
to be
disappeared
Suggestion
disappearing
from
past ten years
Suggestion
the past ten years
.
For instance
, according to the Hindustan Time in 2018, 90% mankinds are so called socially
active on
Accept comma addition
active, on
social media, but I'm realistic they end up making
few friends
Suggestion
a few friends
. To conclude, the use of cell phones should be for
necessary purpose
Suggestion
necessary purposes
the necessary purpose
a necessary purpose
, which will have a good impact on users for communication purpose.
Although
, the smart phones have its own bane, it depends upon the proper utilization & control over phones.
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