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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

#people #children #school #materials #waste #home
The increase amount of problem concerning
waste
 is becoming unstoppable as regards to
this
 some people thinks that proper
waste
 disposal should be taught to children at school while another believes that children should learn
this
 at home. There are many of things that can do
to
Suggestion
with
 a
waste
 material on the
first
 hand, it is true that proper
waste
 disposal should
first
 learn at home, parents should teach their child on how to properly discard a
waste
, in
this
 simple learning children will become well aware about the environment and be discipline in nature,
moreover
 learning how to recycle material not just
waste
 will help the environment to improve and may lessen the amount of phenomenal issue about global warming
also
 recycling can be fun and improves a child's creativity. On the
second
 hand, things that can be recycled
unto
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 a
waste
 product can
also
 be a form of income, young people who learn to recycle materials can sell it and may find another good
purposes
Suggestion
purpose
 to
such
 things.
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