The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The percentage breakdown of
government’s
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spending across nine categories in 2010 and 2015 is presented in the two pie charts below. Over the five-year period, the
expenditures
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witnessed significant changes. The
overall
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picture indicates that,
expenditures
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in most
areas
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were cut by the government in order to fund the cost of borrowing and nation’s welfare needs. In both years under analysis, the four largest categories of government
expenditures
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were: Education, Healthcare, Pensions and Defence, with Education making up the largest portion of 24% and 21% in 2010 and 2015, respectively.
On the contrary
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, the smallest
areas
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of spending were: Transport, Culture and Leisure and Other
expenditures
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. Spending on Welfare and Interest on borrowings laid in between. It is interestingly seen that, between 2010 and 2015, except for Pensions; which remained the same at 19%, the
government’s
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spending on the four largest
areas
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had dropped. It is
also
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readily apparent that, the smallest
areas
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of
government’s
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spending, namely; Transport and Culture and Leisure
also
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witnessed a vital decrease with the Transport budget declining by two thirds.
On the other hand
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, spending on Welfare and Interest on
government’s
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borrowing rose dramatically, with the latter doubling over the five-year period to 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words government’s, expenditures, areas with synonyms.
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