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Some people believe that universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses as rates of obesity are getting higher and higher.To what extent do you agree?

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Sport has been seen as an alternate way of keeping oneself fit as opposed to visiting fitness
centers
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 for many years. In order to address the obesity
issues increasing
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issues, increasing
 by the day, some think that it should be mandated for all students as part of their degree education. I completely agree with
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 and will discuss the reasons in the essay. Taking up any sport will benefit the individual directly. If sports are mandated in universities, it will serve as an additional activity (apart from studies) to keep the students away from the countless distractions they encounter.
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, the reason for many college dropouts is the inability to focus on the studies. Because sports will be compulsory, the students will have to keep themselves fit both physically and mentally. The improved mental strength will help to retain their focus on the studies as well.
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, sports
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also has
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also have
 social benefits as the graduating students would have acquired skills to handle different situations in life. Sports puts players through different situations and instill a never give-up attitude. Some of the greatest sport performances have come up after being down at one point. The universities would provide a more complete person in terms of social skills.
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, the industries will
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 benefit as the universities will produce individuals who are better capable of handling various challenges and contribute effectively at work. To conclude, sports has various benefits to the player
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himself, and
 the society as a whole.
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, I strongly agree that sports should be a mandatory part of the University education in the future.

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