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Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than homemade food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#people #meals #food
The graph illustrates the several
companies's
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companies'
 waste produced over than 15 years. Overall, the three of them demonstrates completely different trends every five years,
also
, each
companies's
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companies'
 line have some different
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 which A is blue, B is green and C is orange. In 2000, the blue line had recorded around 12 tonnes and, every 5 years later, the amount of the waste produced had declined
until
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by
 2015. At that time, the number had reached around 9 tonnes.
However
, in the green line, the starting point of the figure was below 9. Until 2005, the number had increased and reached above 9. From that point, the amount had plunged
to
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by
 almost 3 during 2006 to 2015.
On the other hand
, the orange string had rapidly
rose
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risen
 and it had recorded between 3 to 6 in 2000, almost 6 in 2005, higher than 6 in 2010 and over than 9 in 2015.

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