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Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world-wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Internet
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The internet
 has become popular and useful to people in today’s generation it
is now use
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is now used
now uses
 as a form of communication to many people overseas while to some people it is a tool to a conversation other are concern about the negative effects of
this
 invention.
This
 essay will
discus
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
 why it is completely untrue that
internet
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the internet
an internet
 has a negative effect
in
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on
 social interaction.
To begin
 with, many are now addicted to
internet
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the internet
 and sometimes misuse
internet
 in other forms while to some family it is a tool
to
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for
of
 communication to others
internet
 broke the bond of some family, example to
this
 many families spend more time now
to
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in
with
 social media than talking to one another. On the secondhand many people use
internet
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the internet
 as a form of communication specially
to
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for
 people who are working abroad and away to their family for instants parents who work overseas can now talk to their child
on
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about
 different social
media unlike
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media, unlike
on
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in
 later years people used to send their
letter
Suggestion
letters
 to
box office
Suggestion
the box office
 for them to stay connected to their family and wait until it arrives to designated home.

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