Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Different people hold different point of view regarding the way

media

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the media

treat famous personalities, specifically in terms of coverage of their private lives. I strongly believe that the media should refrain itself from breaching the

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of notable personalities & I will provide suitable reasoning to support my stand. To

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strengthen my position, light on the other

view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

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be shed along with discussing its faults.

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, it should be noted that

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is equally needed by everyone. For me

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is our right & cannot be compromised in any way. In my opinion, media nowadays fail to draw

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the line

a line

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between private & social life. It greatly confuses the two and the result is obnoxious, unethical, spiced up news. Taking the example of the latest news hype about a Pakistani actress wearing western clothes & smoking with an Indian star; the act itself is very personal but media of both countries didn’t fail to fully cover it and make a fuss out of it. It can be easily estimated that 40% of news influx is related to private matters of celebrities and

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needs to change. They use it to increase their channel rankings & get maximum

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, there is a school of thought that believes that fame comes for a certain price &

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to sacrifice your

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. They are comfortable with

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the media breaching privacy

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of celebrities as they are of the opinion that a celebrity becomes a national asset & is the bearer of national culture. I again, condemn

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thought & believes that it is unethical to poke around into

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the private matters

of anyone. Concluding, I want to say that line must be drawn between a celebrity’s private & social life & media should avoid invading their lives, as

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is our psychological need. It is not an acceptable trend to use

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news for increased channel ratings.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

A city should try to preserve its old, historic buildings rather than replacing them with modern buildings.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?