Last Month you had an overseas holiday with your friends where you stayed at their house.they have just send you some holiday photos. write a letter to your friends. in your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didnot write earlier invite theim to come and stay with you

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Dear Robert and Ellen, How are you both? I hope you get

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letter in good condition. It’s been a very short time we spend a good and memorable time with each other but it feels like much longer. Thank you so much not only for

memorable

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your memorable

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vacations as well as for sharing the lovely pictures. Staying with adorable people like you at your luxury home was the wonderful experience of my life. I really missed the yummy food which Ellen served me every day. Canada is a scenic place with remarkable wildlife, mountains, and a conducive natural environment and particular your place which is a perfect locality to spend

whole

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your whole

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life peacefully. Sorry, it has taken me too much time to write. As soon as I landed back, my dad became sick. We were running around looking after him. Now he seems to be improving. I hope he will be fine soon.

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Month, there is a 25th marriage adversary party of my parents and I will be delighted if you should come to attend. India is

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a beautiful place to visit. You both can stay with us as there are many rooms in my house. We will come to pick you at the airport. I really hope you will come to attend

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. Take care and write back as soon as possible. Regards, John

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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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