You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • Describe the situation • Explain your problem and why is it difficult to work • Say the kind of accommodation you would prefer write 150 words

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to complain about the difficulty I am facing during my stay at the Dental hostel in room number 12 which I am presently sharing with my roommate. Since my home is far away from the college, I had to shift to here, so that I can save time on travelling and concentrate on my studies.

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, since the arrival of my new roommate, my stay here is becoming extremely difficult. Despite

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me requesting her to not play loud music, she does not listen.

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, her friends visit our room and they talk loudly for hours, due to which I cannot concentrate on my studies.

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, she keeps the light switched on until the late hours because of which I am unable to sleep well.

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has affected my overall performance at work. I would like to request you to change my accommodation and give me another room, which I do not have to share with anyone, as it is my final term. I would

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request you to kindly address

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matter on priority. Awaiting your response at the earliest Yours faithfully, Sonia Ahuja

Fri Jan 24 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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