the prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. government funding should reflect this. to what extent do you agree?

The issue of the increasing number of patients with serious

disease

has been heatedly debated by public for years.

Somepeople

Suggestion

Some people

think that

government

support should be contributed to

diminsh

decrease in size, extent, or range

diminish

this

issue;

however other

Accept comma addition

however, another

however another

group of people

hold

Suggestion

holds

the opinion that the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

will not be responsible. In the following

pparagraphs

one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line

paragraphs

paragraph

, I will proffer rationale for my

veiwpoint

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoint

and give supporting reasons

for

Suggestion

in

this

matter. The primary reason for

gvernment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

funding is to build range of

health

care

services for all patients.

Morespesificaly

, the main goal of the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

must be targeting patients with chronic

disease

. In

additon

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

, give these patients

the high

Suggestion

the highest

quality

serviecs

performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others

services

service

by building a

near by

close at hand

nearby

health

care

facilities

Suggestion

facility

for chronic

disease

patients. For

instunce

an occurrence of something

instance

instances

instanced

, there

shold

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be a

centre

for renal failure patients in every constrict of a city. By doing

this

, any patients with

reanl

of or relating to the kidneys

renal

disease

could go to the

near by

close at hand

nearby

centre

and get immediate help

in stead

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of going to the fur away

hspitals

a health facility where patients receive treatment

hospitals

hospital

and waiting for

long time

Suggestion

a long time

. Not only the

finantial

involving financial matters

financial

support of the

government

will help to construct

near by

Suggestion

a nearby health centre

nearby health centre

the nearby health centre

health

centre

, but

also

it will provide a treatment for the

serius

concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities

serious

series

sick people.

Moreover

, the fund of the

government

will provide the medicine to treat life

threating

threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments

threatening

disease

. For

exaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

, the money supported by the

governemt

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

would help to supply drugs for low immune patients

such

as HIV. In return,

this

would help to decrease the number of HIV patients as well as the patients would get the

tratment

care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)

treatment

for free. In sum, I

senserly

with sincerity; without pretense

sincerely

maintain the

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that the

government

must give a

finincial

involving financial matters

financial

spport

give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to

support

spot

sport

to build

health

care

facilities as well as providing medicine for serious

disease

patients in every city. I hope in the near future, the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

support will decrease the chronic

disease

patients by building high quality

health

care

centre

and providing the effective treatment for them as soon as possible.