the prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. government funding should reflect this. to what extent do you agree?
The issue of the increasing number of patients with serious
disease
has been heatedly debated by public for years. Somepeople
think that Suggestion
Some people
government
support should be contributed to diminsh
decrease in size, extent, or range
diminish
this
issue; however other
group of people Accept comma addition
however, another
however another
hold
the opinion that the Suggestion
holds
goverment
will not be responsible. In the following the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
pparagraphs
, I will proffer rationale for my one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
veiwpoint
and give supporting reasons a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
for
Suggestion
in
this
matter.
The primary reason for gvernment
funding is to build range of the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
health
care
services for all patients. Morespesificaly
, the main goal of the goverment
must be targeting patients with chronic the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
disease
. In additon
, give these patients a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
the high
quality Suggestion
the highest
serviecs
by building a performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
service
near by
close at hand
nearby
health
care
facilities
for chronic Suggestion
facility
disease
patients. For instunce
, there an occurrence of something
instance
instances
instanced
shold
be a expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
centre
for renal failure patients in every constrict of a city. By doing this
, any patients with reanl
of or relating to the kidneys
renal
disease
could go to the near by
close at hand
nearby
centre
and get immediate help in stead
of going to the fur away in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
hspitals
and waiting for a health facility where patients receive treatment
hospitals
hospital
long time
.
Not only the Suggestion
a long time
finantial
support of the involving financial matters
financial
government
will help to construct near by
Suggestion
a nearby health centre
nearby health centre
the nearby health centre
health
centre
, but also
it will provide a treatment for the serius
sick people. concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
series
Moreover
, the fund of the government
will provide the medicine to treat life threating
threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
disease
. For exaple
, the money supported by the an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
governemt
would help to supply drugs for low immune patients the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
such
as HIV. In return, this
would help to decrease the number of HIV patients as well as the patients would get the tratment
for free.
In sum, I care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
senserly
maintain the with sincerity; without pretense
sincerely
beleive
that the accept as true; take to be true
believe
government
must give a finincial
involving financial matters
financial
spport
to build give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
spot
sport
health
care
facilities as well as providing medicine for serious disease
patients in every city. I hope in the near future, the goverment
support will decrease the chronic the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
disease
patients by building high quality health
care
centre
and providing the effective treatment for them as soon as possible.Submitted by khojahammar on
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