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People think watching movies is a waste of time. do you agree or disagree?

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Movies are considered to be one of the most important
source
 of
entertainment
 in the modern era. Though, Watching movie is argue to be wasting time by people;
however
, I oppose
this
 view because of the primary
source
 of
entertainment
 and knowledge we can get from the movies. To start with,
Firstly
, In modern society, People works around the clock and because of
this
 they get very limited
source
 of
entertainment
 and movies considered to be one the primary
source
 of
entertainment
. So, people love to watch movie, according to their choices and preferences like comedy, action and science friction. To illustrate with an example, according to a survey from S.
com
Suggestion
Com
, 70% people agree to watch movies
for
Suggestion
For
 their
entertainment
.
Secondly
, Needless to say, People get knowledge about their history and culture from movies as well. In recent times, The scope of movies has been changed and industries tries to create movies who show the history and culture of a country. The good thing is people know do not have or have little knowledge about their great history, loves to watch these kind of movies as well.
For example
,
last
 week a movie has been released in India with the name "Tanaji: an unsung warrior", which shows about an Indian worrier who win a fort back from the
mugals
a bump on a ski slope
moguls
 with his bravery and I never heard about
this
 soldier in past. So it is good for people like me. In conclusion, Movies are one of the biggest sources of information, People watches movies according to their choices. Above essay shows that movies can be watched for
entertainment
 and knowing ancient cultures rather than a waste of time.
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