Despite the variety of sport facilities and gyms, people become less fit than ever What are major causes? What solutions you suggest?
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people though
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people, though
This
essay will cover two areas: causes of this
problem, which consist not only unhealthy life style
, but a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
also
unhealthy food
;
and its solutions which include Accept space
;
life
balance with regular sleep and homemade food
.
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work
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Moreover
, sometime due to this
, they compromise with their sleep and ignore their health
which causes health
issues. Secondly
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food
which are
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work
load in offices.
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work
and personal life
.
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need
excercise
from their busy the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
work
schedule. Along with this
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also
necessary. Finally
, they should skip unhealthy food
. Keeping a domestic helper can solve this
issue on a large scale. Furthermore
, various tiffin services also
available in the city. According to a
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health
will improve, if they made a little modification in their lifestyle.
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cannot
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and work
presure
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life
long with this
much work
pressure and understand the value of health
. Unhealthy life style
and unhealthy a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
food
are main reasons
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this
, though maintaining their personal life
and office life
with regular sleep along with homemade food
can solve this
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on a large scale.a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
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