You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house In your letter describe Yourself and your family Which area you would like to live in And what facilities you need in the house.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to request you to find a suitable rental house for me and my family. I am Urvesh Dudhat and, am working in an MNC company as a web developer. For details of my family, I am living in a joint family including parents, grandparents, wife and two children. We are moving from India to Canada

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my job promotion. I would like to live in an area where I can access a few basic amenities,

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as an Indian grocery store, good healthcare, a gym, and local transportation.

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, I want to purchase a new car after landing over there so please make sure to suggest me rental property which has a garage. I would like to rent a house with some facilities,

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as three bedrooms attached with bathrooms, a living room, a kitchen and a small backyard where my grandparents can plant beautiful flowers. As soon as possible, please send me the list of rental properties. My phone number is 98xxxxxxxx5 in case you need to contact me for more information. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Urvesh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

194 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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