Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.

It is true that some languages are currently on the verge of extinction. One school of thought suggests that governments should allocate some budget to preserve these languages,
while others and I
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while I and others
believe that
such
attempts are a waste of money. There are several reasons why some endangered languages are considered not worth saving.
Firstly
, the cost of saving a
language
will certainly cost a large amount of money and a few people particularly can get benefit from it. And it can lead to
growth
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the growth
of financial burden on its nation.
By contrast
, if governments allocate more funds to other important matters
such
as education, public transport and health. They can certainly save many lives.
In addition
, it might be ineffective even if governments make a lot of effort
to
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into
saving less widely languages. The lack of willingness to study for a reason, it might be impractical for them. So that, government
should not encourages
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should not encourage
people to learn if they not willing to.
Thus
, the government should focus on improving crucial sectors
instead
of wasting a lot of
many
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
.
On the other hand
, every nation has its own traditional
language
which is spoken by their ancestors and descendant; and they have been using for many generations. If an endangered
language
does extinct,
then
it means that its cultural identity may
also
disappear and
also
knowledge about
such
civilization remains unknown. By spending money on minority
language
preservation, a vast amount of cultural heritages can be saved in the meantime. In conclusion, while it is true that saving local languages is crucial for some people, in my opinion, it is more important for the government to invest in essential services like
healthcare
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health care
and education.
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