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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Nowadays people are more open to travel. They have been looking for new experiences every day and these experiences include
differente
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
difference
 and
diversity
Suggestion
diverse
 places around the world. Those visitants are more open mind to visit difficultly countries and to live the situations the it brings with. When we talk about it, we know that it gives us thoughts about
pros
Suggestion
the pros
 and cons. The advantages in
this
 case are the fact that they will experience a new from their reality, sometimes is chocking,
however it
Accept comma addition
however, it
take
Suggestion
takes
then
objective case of they
them
 from outside of their box,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 those that live in a developed country and travel to an underdeveloped one. Not to
chose
Suggestion
choose
 a popular destination is
also
 a good idea because it is not
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 crowded and sometimes cheaper than a popular place. In a
broadly
Suggestion
broader
broad
 context, “difficult” destinations are
also
 a good idea from the fact
that is
 not cliche.
however all
Accept comma addition
However, all
However all
 advantages
always comes
Suggestion
always come
 with the disadvantages, and these are the things that no one like to talk, to read or to
experice
give expression to
express
 about.
Nevertheless
, it is important to mention when tourists visit places where the conditions are difficult, they will
fell
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
 uncomfortable and sometimes putting their life
in
Suggestion
at
risck
expose to a chance of loss or damage
risk
. Places
such
 as Africa, the
risck
expose to a chance of loss or damage
risk
risks
 of getting illness are high, India one of the highest place with pollution in the world, Brazil terribly dangerous, etc. Most of these places
mentionated
make reference to
mentioned
 above do not mean are a horrible destination, it will always depend if we are open to go out of our comfort zone and experience reality.

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