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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, equality is one of the issues that everyone’s concern. Some people believe that women can play an equal role as men in every kind of jobs, including police force or military force like the army, whereas, some argue that women are not proper of some kind of job. Personally, I believe that women can do every job without limit. Women and men are equal. So, many people believe that both can do every job not limit with their sexuality.
Furthermore
, in some situations women can
work
 well more than men.
Thus
, teamwork with both male and female in the force is more beneficial.
For example
, normally women are more conservative than men as well as men are stronger than women. If they help each other, it leads to achievement.
On the other hand
, some people argue that the female is not suitable to be police or military, because these jobs normally
work
 in outdoor and need strong body.
However
, the female is weaker than male.
Consequently
, it will be weakness of the team if they accept women to be an army.
In addition
, women should
work
 in the office or indoor locations.
For instance
, accountants are more suitable for women than men since they
work
 in an office and need more conservative which believe that more women have
this
 skill. In conclusion, sometimes there are many jobs which more suitable for female more than police or military, but I believe that everyone can be anything that they want to be.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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