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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree. ?

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It is argued that
face
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 to
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 interaction is more effective method to communicate as compared to emails, letters and messages. I agree to the aforesaid statement and below I will
first
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 explain how oral
communication
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 with the person sitting in front of you, provides
non verbal
being other than verbal communication
nonverbal
 cues to the receiver, and
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, how it create an opportunity for the participants to clarify any doubts.
Non verbal
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Nonverbal
 cues like expression, tone
,
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hand signals are an essential part of
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. These cues provide context to help in assigning
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weights
weighted
 to the message
.
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, use of hand signals while communicating in front of each other help in overcoming any language limitations.
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, people when visiting
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a foreign place
 where they are unaware of the local language often use hand signals to show what they mean. Doubts or misunderstandings are bound to happen in any
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, but
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 to
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 interaction provides a platform to clarify those doubts instantly by promoting two- way
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. As the person is sitting in front of you it is easy to ask questions and get answers
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to
 them without waiting for the response.
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 helps in increasing the speed of making decisions.
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, 80 percent of organizations reported that they use kickoff meeting
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 of status
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of
 email for
there
of them or themselves
their
 critical projects to save time and getting effective results. In conclusion, I believe that people should utilize every opportunity to employ
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 to
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 interaction in their
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 so as to clearly state the purpose and
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clarify the
 context of their message.
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