Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy to meet the increasing need. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the modern time of human civilization, we may see a substantial crisis regarding
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required to run our factories, vehicles, expansions as well as to meet domestic high demand. To keep the pace we used different types of sources like coal
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gas
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air
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water
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but nuclear
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has not been invented that long ago. Since its inception, nuclear
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is becoming
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has become
a point of debate whether
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may carry any good or bad to mankind. Since its exploration as a significant
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of
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, many countries around the world like USA, Russia, France were using it because of
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
phenomenal performance regarding cost per unit of electricity produced compared to others sources.Many modern cities around the world were established depending on nuclear dreams after the chaos and atrocity of 2nd world war. The main benefit of nuclear
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is
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
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efficiency to lower down overall costing compared to vast production,
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initial investment and safety measures in
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regard is quite huge. Many scientists were sure that nuclear
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was the only solution of the rising
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scarcity but their equation got wrong when the nuclear related
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crisis came up in the city of Chernobyl, USSR. That created emergency situations in the whole region not only confined in the
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to Sweden, Norway, Finland. Undoubtedly Nuclear as
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source
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a source
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can give
extraordinary performance
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extraordinary performances
an extraordinary performance
compared to other
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sources, but
there is specific and alarming risk issues are involved with it. For that reason, many countries returned from the idea of using
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as
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(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs
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and used more convenient alternatives. After all human lives are more important than using
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. In my opinion, Nuclear
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is less expensive and efficient
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source, but
not the best
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to use.
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