some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in orter to be successful at school. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Children who take to study at primary
school
, middle
school
or high
school
their brain develops during
this
period.
teachers
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Teachers
or instructors must be careful when they choose teaching means.
in
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In
my opinion,
homework
are
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is
essential part
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an essential part
of studying, in additional, they help to improve pupils' brain.
when
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When
we learn something at
lesson
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lesson, then
then
we must use them
at
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in
practice because practice makes perfect.
if
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If
we do not do
homework
about
topic
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a topic
topics
the topic
that we learn at
school we
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school, we
can forget them during
short term
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a short term
the short term
.
homework
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Homework
exercises help us
at
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in
comprehensive learning process.
another
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Another
reason is time
,
Accept space
,
in other words
, we have a little time at the
school
for comprehensive learning.
it
Suggestion
It
is impossible that learning all topics during 45 minutes or one hour,
as a result
, teachers should give
homework
.
according
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According
to some reason we can agree with
othet
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people that they say
homework
is not necessary for children.
nowadays
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Nowadays
, children tend to play with game
consuls
a small table fixed to a wall or designed to stand against a wall
consoles
or in fresh air,
therefore
, they want to learn everything at the
lesson
.
some
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Some
teachers give to children numerous exercises, and
at
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as
a result, pupils fed up with
education system
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the education system
an education system
.
insturctors
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Instructors
Insturctors
should teach
lesson
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a lesson
lessons
the lesson
and
besides
, they should do some homeworks with children
at
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in
the
lesson
.
in
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In
conclusion, homeworks are important for all
children but
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children, but
teachers must be careful when they choose
quantity
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the quantity
of homeworks.

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