Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The government have taken some measures at the global level. Birthday God only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays
pollution
plays a big role which causes global warming.
as
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As
it can be said that if
environment
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the environment
will not be
saved
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saved, then
then
people will
also
not safe. To stop
this
problem,
this
essay will discuss about the major problems and its solutions which affect the environment in the following paradigms.
Firstly
, due to the extreme emissions of exhaust fumes by vehicle
creates
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create
dark polluted
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dark, polluted
clouds which affect the biosphere.
also
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Also
, comparing
to past one
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past one
decade,
more number
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a number
number
of individuals are using their own vehicle
then
public vehicles. Due to the increase in population, vehicles are
also
increasing and
this
creates
pollution
of
air
.
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
many developing countries are becoming industrialized and
this
affects the greenhouse. So, humans have to reduce the use of private vehicles and
instead
of private vehicles people should use
bicycle
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a bicycle
the bicycle
bicycles
.
Also
, bicycle keep the human healthy and spread no
pollution
.
Also people
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Also, people
should plant more trees rather to cut down the rainforest. So, that
youmans
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Youmans
imams
and many other species will have a fresh
air
.
Moreover
, if
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
is polluted
then
climatic change will form in water and land.
like
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Like
,
nowadays ozone layer
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the nowadays ozone layer
is
also
depleting through the
air
pollution
which affects the melting of polar ice caps due to more heat and sun rays.
Also
,
sea level
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the sea level
will increase.
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
natural disasters like flood and drought will
be come
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
common and
also
extreme weather conditions will take place. So people should protect the
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
as it takes 2.3 billion tons of carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
is the one
third
part of the planet and produce fresh
air
. To put it in a nutshell, individual citizens cannot sit back and say it is someone else responsibility to protect the environment, we must all play our part, individual citizens and government at
global level
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the global level
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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